tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11779531.post1952739685882380075..comments2023-08-04T04:41:39.813-07:00Comments on Of Looking At A Blackbird: Works for meUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11779531.post-41103280515722386382008-08-12T21:43:00.000-07:002008-08-12T21:43:00.000-07:00I suppose the impetus for abandoning my low-key en...I suppose the impetus for abandoning my low-key endings is founded more on a common trend I observe among those that give me feedback rather than my own desire for change. I'll have to ponder the pros and cons I suppose.<BR/>Thanks for the help.JKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06803670271920839776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11779531.post-42360992119109990612008-08-12T10:22:00.000-07:002008-08-12T10:22:00.000-07:00Jarod, I guess it depends on the poem, but are you...Jarod, I guess it depends on the poem, but are you so sure it's a tendency you want to fix? I confess I often prefer a low-key ending.Diane K. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03204316534769002428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11779531.post-74808530341138697862008-08-12T01:06:00.000-07:002008-08-12T01:06:00.000-07:00I often feel as though my poems simply “stop” rath...I often feel as though my poems simply “stop” rather than end. It concerns me that ending on a low note makes a poem feel top-heavy. But, if there’s a way to fix this tendency I haven’t discovered it.JKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06803670271920839776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11779531.post-85029059031808123932008-08-10T05:19:00.000-07:002008-08-10T05:19:00.000-07:00"good crunchy words" -I love that! Plus I'm with y..."good crunchy words" -I love that! Plus I'm with you on the axis of reality.Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11163920808413285914noreply@blogger.com